you should try making an intro without a piano next time, because all of your songs have it in them. cool track tho
you should try making an intro without a piano next time, because all of your songs have it in them. cool track tho
my mizuki remix has no piano in intro, listen to that
The beat is really cool. And even though I don't understand the language you're singing in, I can tell that there is way too much delay on the vocals. Overall it's a nice track though!
Good luck in NGADM :]
Hi, thnx 4 your kind words! There is no "too much" in the world of art, i made this song and everything is made intentionally! But if its your opinon, i am cool with it ;) (i am looking foward to listen to your songs)
this is really cool! especially the part at 00:45 when the kick and snare comes in. The melodies are dope and I love the vibe this gives!
Good luck in NGADM :]
Thank you :)
Woooah I love the vibe and ambience in this one. I love the pad that comes in at 00:37. The mix holds up really well, and it doesn't get too repetitive either.
It sounds kind of weird at 01:14 when the song became completely quiet for a second and then got brought back up. The idea for that was cool, but I feel like you maybe should've low passed it instead of bringing down the whole volume.
Overall this was a very nice listen, and it kept me interested all the way through! Good job!
Good luck in NGADM :]
Thank you for the criticism and good luck to you as well!
the song is very loud, and the whole track is very distorted. It's also offkey throughout the entire song, and a lot of the notes don't work well with one another.
But overall I like the style! it's interesting and unique! Good luck in NGADM :]
Thank you for the feedback. You have opened my eyes to things I haven't noticed before.
this is really cool! I love the sounds/instruments you used. Keep it up, and good luck in NGADM :]
Thank you so much and good luck to you too!!
this is sick!
No u
Congrats on the frontpage man! You deserve it
Thanks dude!
This is really dope! One thing I would do to make it even better is if you used some sidechain. Maybe there already is some, but if that's the case then it's very subtle. But yeah, this is just a personal opinion.
Overall this is very uplifting and awesome, keep it up!
edit: yeah the instruments don't clash with the kick or anything so it's definitely not a bad thing that the sidechain is subtle, but it would give it some more groove you know? which btw, is a personal opinion. I like when there's a lot of sidechain xd
Yeah it's subtle. It doesn't need a lot since the kick is short, but I could play around a little more and see how it fits. Glad you liked it!
sick
dear newgrounds mods, frontpage this
That would be really cool
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