Woah this is really dope! I feel like the build was a little too long, especially considering that the song isn't that long. I love the part at 00:50, it's very catchy. On the second half of that drop I feel like there should've been a ride hitting over each kick. Also, you could've used some white noise downlifters when the drop hits.
Overall this is really nice! Good luck in NGADM! :]