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This is really nice! I think you did a great job with the overall mood in this one. I love the choice of instruments, as they really work well together to create a really nice atmosphere.
I also love how there's always something new in each part, which keeps my interest all the way to the end. Also, 2:37 is absolutely fantastic. The way those chords come in is just wonderful. It sounds very rich.
The only thing I could see being improved are the low piano chords. Putting chords that low makes it sound kinda muddy. That's just my opinion though, not necessarily a bad thing.
I think you did a really great job with this one! Keep it up man! :]

Tangerine responds:

Hey, I never saw this! Sorry for responding so awfully late!

Listening to this now, I agree that the low chords are kind of muddy; however, at the time, I was trying to make the entire song sound moderately dark and I think the low notes sort of work with that. I am really tempted to redo this and make it even better, but I feel that it would be beating it into the ground a little.

Thank you for the comment!

awesome stuff

dude this is amazing

Woah, this is awesome. I love that intro with new instruments coming in one by one like that.
The kick which comes in at 00:40 could be turned up a little bit because it's kinda quiet (imo).
You also have the same melody throughout the whole song, which isn't necessarily a bad thing to have, but it would be cool to see some changes in the melody and chords in the second half of the song, because it does get kinda repetitive.
Another thing, imo, an extra ten seconds to wind it down wouldn't hurt, or to maybe offer the ending a little more finality.
But yeah, this song is sick and I love the instruments and the overall vibe. Good luck in the contest! :]

ChordsInMotion responds:

I agree with everything you said, thanks for the feedback, and gl to you as well! :D

you should try making an intro without a piano next time, because all of your songs have it in them. cool track tho

Vortonox responds:

my mizuki remix has no piano in intro, listen to that

Woah! This is insanely good! Good luck in the ADM :]

Woah this is really dope! I feel like the build was a little too long, especially considering that the song isn't that long. I love the part at 00:50, it's very catchy. On the second half of that drop I feel like there should've been a ride hitting over each kick. Also, you could've used some white noise downlifters when the drop hits.
Overall this is really nice! Good luck in NGADM! :]

Very interesting, and very good. And just like someone else commented, it is indeed weird, but that's a good thing!
Good luck in NGADM :]

The beat is really cool. And even though I don't understand the language you're singing in, I can tell that there is way too much delay on the vocals. Overall it's a nice track though!
Good luck in NGADM :]

kinupsi responds:

Hi, thnx 4 your kind words! There is no "too much" in the world of art, i made this song and everything is made intentionally! But if its your opinon, i am cool with it ;) (i am looking foward to listen to your songs)

this is really cool! especially the part at 00:45 when the kick and snare comes in. The melodies are dope and I love the vibe this gives!
Good luck in NGADM :]

TenodiBoris responds:

Thank you :)

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