It's a cool stucture and all that, but I there is almost no melody. You only used drums and some kind of bass here and there. Although I like the jungle FX, they were quite cool. Maybe you should have gone with a bit more of an ambient style, and maybe add some kind of string to make it a bit less empty. I would suggest you to look up some tutorials on youtube how to make good sound designs, and stuff like that.
It's also very repetitive, and since it's over 5 minutes long, it can get quite boring to listen to.
Also think of making the song title capitalized, it stands out more and it will give you more listeners.
Sorry for the low rating, but if you just could add a bit more of what I just said, I would rank this a bit higher.